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Monday, March 14, 2016

Billy the Kid Brought to Life

My latest review on Book I; Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid.



Bandita Bonita: Romaning Billy the Kid, Book I is available in Print and eBook at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and various Independent Bookstores. 
eBook $3.99.
 For purchasing information and to read further information regarding the Bandita series, please visit my website (www.nicolemdixonauthor.com)




Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid, Book I, a Novel. (Book II, Bandita Bonita and Billy the Kid: The Scourge of New Mexico, slated for spring, 2016. To read an excerpt from Book II, please click here (Colorful Language)




Billy the Kid Brought to Life

My latest review on Book I; Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid.



Bandita Bonita: Romaning Billy the Kid, Book I is available in Print and eBook at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and various Independent Bookstores. 
eBook $3.99.
 For purchasing information and to read further information regarding the Bandita series, please visit my website (www.nicolemdixonauthor.com)




Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid, Book I, a Novel. (Book II, Bandita Bonita and Billy the Kid: The Scourge of New Mexico, slated for spring, 2016. To read an excerpt from Book II, please click here (Colorful Language)




Saturday, March 5, 2016

Reviews for Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid, Book I of IV





These are the reviews I've received for the first book in my four-part series, Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid.

I have received primarily 5-star reviews, and most of my reviews are from men which pleases me greatly as I wrote the book with the male ego in mind; but ladies, I wrote it thinking of you! I'd like to share these reviews with those of you who might like to read them and may consider buying the book. The second book in the series, Bandita Bonita and Billy the Kid: The Scourge of New Mexico, is slated for spring, 2016.

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To Purchase a copy of Book I, Please Click here. It is available in both print and ebook formats. Ebooks, #Kindle and #Nook, are $3.99. It is also available on Google Play and for iPad.


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Having read extensively about Billy the Kid for my own novels, I was curious to see how the author would approach the story. I found myself entranced from the very first paragraph. The author's grasp of a teenage girl's emotions is stunningly well done. Her picture of life in 1877 is full and almost seems lived in. The history is accurate, the characters fully realized and the prose is spot on. I have not enjoyed a novel this much in a long time. Congratulations on a job very well done.

______________________


Nicole Maddalo Dixon does something many authors have difficulty doing. She manages a very well written historical fictional narrative with that of actual historic events. Over the years many authors seem to enjoy taking great liberties with the latter. Not Dixon. She ingratiates her Lucy with characters we have come to know very well through the history books and ties her imaginative story of a young woman coming from the east, who longs for a life lived on her merit to their story. With her hand promised to another man, Lucy finds herself looking into the blue eyes of a well known tragic youth and falls instantly in love with him. Billy the Kid had many sweethearts in his short life and Lucy, who repeatedly tried to deny what she really felt, was determined to be one of them. They would soon find themselves in the midst of New Mexico's most famous feud: The Lincoln County War.

______________________


I am a huge fan of Billy the Kid and westerns. If you are a man, who likes to read, don't let the word romance derail you from buying this book. This book was well researched and well thought out. The author did a really good job with the details. Billy and Lucy have an undeniable chemistry. Lucy is a breath of fresh air in a 120 year old story of the old wests most famous figure. I am looking forward to the next installment of the story of Billy and Lucy. Bandita is fantastic book. I urge anyone to buy this book.

_______________________


When I read the first book in the series of Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid, I didn’t know what to expect. The primary reigning info out there on the most infamous outlaw can be found in the multi-bios on the subject.

However, Ms. Dixon took a different, refreshing approach to telling his story. As I’ve followed the author through social media, she had mentioned that her primary goal was to write a Bio-Novel, though technically it is considered Historical Fiction. This piqued my interest and I was not disappointed! The facts are all there, of course, as that was obviously important to the author, but she does it in a way that introduces the reader and giving them an amazing insight into the man himself and why things may or may not have turned out the way they had. Billy the Kid pops off the page; the author created him as is a 3-dimensional character to say the least.

The history is all there, so that should satiate the history buffs, but for those of us who are vehemently opposed to reading an historically fictional take on the matter, you should go in with an open mind. And when you do, you’ll find that the biography on Billy the Kid is there, along with an understanding of the boy outlaw himself. Therefore, it is both an informative and entertaining read.

I’d be surprised if there was another book/series out there that captures the personalities such as Ms. Dixon’s work has. Biographies, as important as they are, are basically the same. In Ms. Dixon’s work, she actually brings the important characters to life which should help break down demographic boarders rather than just allowing this book to sit in a western niche.

It contained all the appropriate elements: the historical facts, It’s funny, it’s heartbreaking, and it’s romantic. It has everything one could ask for. It goes above and beyond where Billy the Kid’s story is concerned, and I highly recommend this read!

_____________________


A beautifully written and fun read! I enjoyed hearing Billy's wild west adventures from Lucy's point of view.

____________________


"Bandita Bonita" is a fresh and unique take on the oft-told saga of Billy the Kid. The narrative voice chosen by author Nicole Maddalo Dixon is what makes it so.
Covered in the past by an eclectic mix of writers from Ned Buntline and Walter Noble Burns, to Gore Vidal and Larry McMutry. the vast majority of retellings of this story are related from the male point of view. Here, we are presented with Billy's story from a female perspective - and not as one might expect, a tale told by an improbable 19th Century cowgirl or a dusky, fiery-eyed senorita, but from a polished, sophisticated former New York society girl who finds herself propelled into Billy's world through the machinations of a pair of ambitious and greedy men - her wealthy father and her fiancé, John Tunstall, to whom she has been promised as a pawn in a complicated business arrangement between the pair. This is a very plausible plotline, considering that women were regarded as chattel property of husbands and fathers in that era.
Ms. Dixon does a masterful job of portraying the conflict within Elucia (Lucy), the heroine of the story, as she explores issues of culture shock, class snobbery ( in herself and others), and Victorian notions of love versus duty and honor.
This is, all in all, an above average look through fresh eyes at an old and beloved piece of American folklore. I gave it four stars because of some tiny flaws that are more in the nature of quibbles than true complaints. Ms. Dixon sometimes makes an incorrect choice when it comes to homonyms, and a couple of times, she makes a slightly jarring change from Lucy's point of view to the omniscient "God's Eye". Still these, as I say, are in the main just quibbles. As to the storytelling, I would have given it six stars if I could.
"Bandita Bonita" is the first volume of a series. I definitely look forward to the next installment.

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The first romantic historical novel in a series by author, Nicole Maddalo Dixon, is an intriguing imaginative tale of Lucy Howard with the historical Billy Bonney, aka Billy the Kid. The narrative of this novel begins in August 1977 shortly before the outbreak of the legendary Lincoln County War and ends in July 1878 with the Five Day Battle in Lincoln, NM. In the early portion, Lucy arrived in Lincoln County, NM to begin a pre-arranged loveless marriage to John Tunstall. Shortly thereafter, she meets Tunstall's hired hand, young Billy Bonney, and quickly falls in love with him. There are many twists and turns over a period just shy of just one year. Ms. Dixon's novel was true to historical facts throughout (other than the fictional romance, of course). This novel is definitely a good read and will entertain you throughout. I will be looking forward to reading the second installment of this author's series.

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Bandita Bonita is about an upper class girl from New York, who has to put her own feelings aside to make her family happy by agreeing to a business arrangement that her father had made, which consists of an arranged marriage. Lucy is forced to move from New York to New Mexico to be with her fiancé', where he forces her to learn to defend herself by learning to shoot a gun. Her fiancé, John, hires Billy the Kid to be his right-hand man and help defend his land and also train Lucy for whatever bad comes their way. Of course this comes in handy when they have a couple of scuffles with the Santa Fe Ring. But even though Billy keeps telling Lucy to go back to New York to live a better life, fate keeps bringing her back to Billy and the Regulators.

This book is a really great fast read. The author has an excellent way of putting Lucy's feelings on paper in a the way she describes how Lucy feels through the entire book. I also had a clear vision of how the west was back then with Billy the Kid because of the author's way with words and being very descriptive and precise. I wish I had more spare time, I would have finished this book a lot sooner. I didn't want to put the book down. So, if you are tired of reading about vampires, werewolves or fairies, I highly recommend this book.

__________________________


First I must say that once I began reading this book, I was unable to put it down. I read it, cover to cover in 24 hours. It is a very gripping story and draws you in to life in the 19th century.

It is a captivating story about a strong willed woman who struggles with her love for notorious " Billy the Kid," and the expectations of women in the 19th century.

She brings humor to the situation with her sarcasm, and quick wit; yet levity amist the trials of war.

I found myself rooting for her and Billy, and identifying with each of their inner struggles. It is well written and easy to read. I highly recommend this book.

________________________


Our protagonist, Lucy Howard, is an unhappy eastern socialite sent out west to Lincoln County N.M., to fulfill a prearranged marriage to a man whom she does not love, John H. Tunstall, a young proprietor. When her husband-to-be hires a young farmhand, destined to become the notorious Billy the Kid, Lucy's unhappiness is tempered as she falls in love with the young future outlaw.

John is constantly harassed and threatened by the Santa Fe Ring as he and his competing business is unwelcome. The Ring unofficially runs Lincoln County, and when they make good on their threats and murder John, Lucy's own life is threatened and is forced into the war that arises with the death of John as her own life is in danger.

Lucy then finds bittersweet freedom while fighting alongside her true love, Billy, and the rest of the Lincoln Co. Regulators, and is forced to acknowledge the horror of the oppression of women as she fights for the oppression of others in general.

A fascinating tale of death and tragedy alleviated by humorous episodes as Lucy finds her way in a third class society foreign to her.

The reader easily learns to care about the characters in the story and can’t help but read to find out what happens next. I couldn’t put this book down.

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Let’s face it, men don’t read romance novels and I’m no exception. That includes my gay friends too (put your show tunes stereotypes behind you). When our wives and girlfriends drag us to chick flicks and we let you cry on our shoulders, any tears we may be shedding are tears of pain and boredom. Our feminine sides want us to slap those silly women straight and tell them to get on with their lives.

I can’t tell you why I not only read Maddalo Dixon’s Bandita Bonita, but wanted to read it. The truth is, I tried to find it unsuccessfully on Amazon and iBooks and had to download it on Nook, which is my least favorite platform. Only later was I able to find the correct links on the other two vendors. Even then I the book was an impulse buy because it was a romance. But the blurb hooked me, and I read one of Dixon’s online blogs describing a purple prose confrontation with her obnoxious neighbors and I knew in my heart that this author, a Philly girl, was no delicate primrose.

Dixon’s female readers should be assured that she dishes out plenty of girly scenes to keep them enthralled. In fact, whenever I began to forget Bonita was, in fact, a romance she made sure to throw in a what my wife and I call another Smallville scene to heighten the heartbreak potential. (CW fans know the formula: Clark/Lana, Oliver/Laurel—substitute any two CW characters—in this case, Billy and the heroine Lucy, arguing who should make the greater self-sacrifice, set their love aside and go their separate ways forever.) But the scene would be over in a paragraph or a couple of easily browsed pages, the bad guys would threaten mortal peril and more manly interests would engage me again. All in all, Dixon balances her male and female readers’ interests with a deft turn of pen.

Dixon injects the fictional Elucia Howard, or Lucy, into the historical story of William Bonney (Billy the Kid) and John Tunstall at the outbreak of the Lincoln County Wars in New Mexico. History buffs will remember this period as the moment that established Bonney’s reputation as a gunslinger and folk hero. Lucy’s father arranges her marriage to cattle baron and merchant Tunstall just as he prepares to engage in a war with competing merchants Murphy and Dolan (who paid the sheriff to back them).

Tunstall, who has no interest in Lucy except for her land and money, delegates Billy to keep her company and teach her how to shoot to protect herself in the wild country. Lucy, who never liked being told what to do, yearns for independence. As readers anticipate, the two fall in love. When Dolan’s men kill Tunstall, Billy has to take Lucy on the run to protect her from the range war that follows. She fights with grim determination to prove herself as capable a rider and gunman as any of Billy’s gang. As Dolan’s men close in, Billy and Lucy’s relationship becomes as volatile as the life they live.

Dixon’s account of the Lincoln County Wars, Lucy’s ride with Billy and the Regulators, the New Mexico landscape and towns to which they run are vivid and visual, even her minor characters full of life. She paints every detail, from the dinners to the music to dances. Readers looking for a sense and scent of Southwestern history will find it in these pages. And, although I’m no historian, the story squares with the accounts I’ve read of the period.

Lucy’s story isn’t complete. Bandita Bonita is the first in a series and ends with the five day war between the Regulators and the Doyle gang in Lincoln that ended with Bonney on the run and the beginning of his official declaration as an outlaw. Male readers should be cautioned that the book will drag for you in the beginning, as Billy comes a courting and Lucy dithers over her duty to Tunstall and her attraction to the young gunslinger. Then the shooting starts and romance readers may have to wade through a few action pages to get their heart tug fix.

Nor can Dixon resist dabbling in modern romantic dialog. (Can you say “anachronism”?) I stopped counting the number of times Billy promised Lucy he didn’t have an agenda, a word I’m not sure existed in the Wild West, much less in the vocabulary of a marginally literate gunslinger. In fact, on the whole, Billy’s character seemed far to well-spoken for a someone from his background (and I should know, I grew up with ranch hands and farm boys).

But if I’m going to nitpick Dixon, I would have to nitpick Shakespeare, and this is one of the reasons I would never tackle historical novels of any kind, at least not as a writer.

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This book caught me on page one and refused to let go. It was suspenseful, charming and sexy. And above all it flowed beautifully. Being a historical nut I was pleased at how well the book followed actual history. Very well done, Ms Dixon. And may you pen many more, JRW

_______________________


Catching the sensibilities and texture of the nineteenth century, this first novel both entertains and enlightens. It is a well researched account of the old west and one Billy the Kid, who despite being depicted in countless movies and books before this, somehow seems more human here than ever before. That may be due to the story being told through the eyes of a young woman thrust into a world she is unprepared for, but doesn't hide from. It is passionate and rich in it's grasp of the past, from the fabrics of the dress to the specialties of the firearm. It all brings to life one of the most interesting and yes, exciting chapters in the distinctively American frontier west - the Lincoln County War. Look it up if you are not familiar with it. It's fascinating stuff. But before you do that, get this book and read it.





Reviews for Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid, Book I of IV





These are the reviews I've received for the first book in my four-part series, Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid.

I have received primarily 5-star reviews, and most of my reviews are from men which pleases me greatly as I wrote the book with the male ego in mind; but ladies, I wrote it thinking of you! I'd like to share these reviews with those of you who might like to read them and may consider buying the book. The second book in the series, Bandita Bonita and Billy the Kid: The Scourge of New Mexico, is slated for spring, 2016.

_________________________________________________________________________________
To Purchase a copy of Book I, Please Click here. It is available in both print and ebook formats. Ebooks, #Kindle and #Nook, are $3.99. It is also available on Google Play and for iPad.


____________________


Having read extensively about Billy the Kid for my own novels, I was curious to see how the author would approach the story. I found myself entranced from the very first paragraph. The author's grasp of a teenage girl's emotions is stunningly well done. Her picture of life in 1877 is full and almost seems lived in. The history is accurate, the characters fully realized and the prose is spot on. I have not enjoyed a novel this much in a long time. Congratulations on a job very well done.

______________________


Nicole Maddalo Dixon does something many authors have difficulty doing. She manages a very well written historical fictional narrative with that of actual historic events. Over the years many authors seem to enjoy taking great liberties with the latter. Not Dixon. She ingratiates her Lucy with characters we have come to know very well through the history books and ties her imaginative story of a young woman coming from the east, who longs for a life lived on her merit to their story. With her hand promised to another man, Lucy finds herself looking into the blue eyes of a well known tragic youth and falls instantly in love with him. Billy the Kid had many sweethearts in his short life and Lucy, who repeatedly tried to deny what she really felt, was determined to be one of them. They would soon find themselves in the midst of New Mexico's most famous feud: The Lincoln County War.

______________________


I am a huge fan of Billy the Kid and westerns. If you are a man, who likes to read, don't let the word romance derail you from buying this book. This book was well researched and well thought out. The author did a really good job with the details. Billy and Lucy have an undeniable chemistry. Lucy is a breath of fresh air in a 120 year old story of the old wests most famous figure. I am looking forward to the next installment of the story of Billy and Lucy. Bandita is fantastic book. I urge anyone to buy this book.

_______________________


When I read the first book in the series of Bandita Bonita: Romancing Billy the Kid, I didn’t know what to expect. The primary reigning info out there on the most infamous outlaw can be found in the multi-bios on the subject.

However, Ms. Dixon took a different, refreshing approach to telling his story. As I’ve followed the author through social media, she had mentioned that her primary goal was to write a Bio-Novel, though technically it is considered Historical Fiction. This piqued my interest and I was not disappointed! The facts are all there, of course, as that was obviously important to the author, but she does it in a way that introduces the reader and giving them an amazing insight into the man himself and why things may or may not have turned out the way they had. Billy the Kid pops off the page; the author created him as is a 3-dimensional character to say the least.

The history is all there, so that should satiate the history buffs, but for those of us who are vehemently opposed to reading an historically fictional take on the matter, you should go in with an open mind. And when you do, you’ll find that the biography on Billy the Kid is there, along with an understanding of the boy outlaw himself. Therefore, it is both an informative and entertaining read.

I’d be surprised if there was another book/series out there that captures the personalities such as Ms. Dixon’s work has. Biographies, as important as they are, are basically the same. In Ms. Dixon’s work, she actually brings the important characters to life which should help break down demographic boarders rather than just allowing this book to sit in a western niche.

It contained all the appropriate elements: the historical facts, It’s funny, it’s heartbreaking, and it’s romantic. It has everything one could ask for. It goes above and beyond where Billy the Kid’s story is concerned, and I highly recommend this read!

_____________________


A beautifully written and fun read! I enjoyed hearing Billy's wild west adventures from Lucy's point of view.

____________________


"Bandita Bonita" is a fresh and unique take on the oft-told saga of Billy the Kid. The narrative voice chosen by author Nicole Maddalo Dixon is what makes it so.
Covered in the past by an eclectic mix of writers from Ned Buntline and Walter Noble Burns, to Gore Vidal and Larry McMutry. the vast majority of retellings of this story are related from the male point of view. Here, we are presented with Billy's story from a female perspective - and not as one might expect, a tale told by an improbable 19th Century cowgirl or a dusky, fiery-eyed senorita, but from a polished, sophisticated former New York society girl who finds herself propelled into Billy's world through the machinations of a pair of ambitious and greedy men - her wealthy father and her fiancé, John Tunstall, to whom she has been promised as a pawn in a complicated business arrangement between the pair. This is a very plausible plotline, considering that women were regarded as chattel property of husbands and fathers in that era.
Ms. Dixon does a masterful job of portraying the conflict within Elucia (Lucy), the heroine of the story, as she explores issues of culture shock, class snobbery ( in herself and others), and Victorian notions of love versus duty and honor.
This is, all in all, an above average look through fresh eyes at an old and beloved piece of American folklore. I gave it four stars because of some tiny flaws that are more in the nature of quibbles than true complaints. Ms. Dixon sometimes makes an incorrect choice when it comes to homonyms, and a couple of times, she makes a slightly jarring change from Lucy's point of view to the omniscient "God's Eye". Still these, as I say, are in the main just quibbles. As to the storytelling, I would have given it six stars if I could.
"Bandita Bonita" is the first volume of a series. I definitely look forward to the next installment.

______________________


The first romantic historical novel in a series by author, Nicole Maddalo Dixon, is an intriguing imaginative tale of Lucy Howard with the historical Billy Bonney, aka Billy the Kid. The narrative of this novel begins in August 1977 shortly before the outbreak of the legendary Lincoln County War and ends in July 1878 with the Five Day Battle in Lincoln, NM. In the early portion, Lucy arrived in Lincoln County, NM to begin a pre-arranged loveless marriage to John Tunstall. Shortly thereafter, she meets Tunstall's hired hand, young Billy Bonney, and quickly falls in love with him. There are many twists and turns over a period just shy of just one year. Ms. Dixon's novel was true to historical facts throughout (other than the fictional romance, of course). This novel is definitely a good read and will entertain you throughout. I will be looking forward to reading the second installment of this author's series.

________________________


Bandita Bonita is about an upper class girl from New York, who has to put her own feelings aside to make her family happy by agreeing to a business arrangement that her father had made, which consists of an arranged marriage. Lucy is forced to move from New York to New Mexico to be with her fiancé', where he forces her to learn to defend herself by learning to shoot a gun. Her fiancé, John, hires Billy the Kid to be his right-hand man and help defend his land and also train Lucy for whatever bad comes their way. Of course this comes in handy when they have a couple of scuffles with the Santa Fe Ring. But even though Billy keeps telling Lucy to go back to New York to live a better life, fate keeps bringing her back to Billy and the Regulators.

This book is a really great fast read. The author has an excellent way of putting Lucy's feelings on paper in a the way she describes how Lucy feels through the entire book. I also had a clear vision of how the west was back then with Billy the Kid because of the author's way with words and being very descriptive and precise. I wish I had more spare time, I would have finished this book a lot sooner. I didn't want to put the book down. So, if you are tired of reading about vampires, werewolves or fairies, I highly recommend this book.

__________________________


First I must say that once I began reading this book, I was unable to put it down. I read it, cover to cover in 24 hours. It is a very gripping story and draws you in to life in the 19th century.

It is a captivating story about a strong willed woman who struggles with her love for notorious " Billy the Kid," and the expectations of women in the 19th century.

She brings humor to the situation with her sarcasm, and quick wit; yet levity amist the trials of war.

I found myself rooting for her and Billy, and identifying with each of their inner struggles. It is well written and easy to read. I highly recommend this book.

________________________


Our protagonist, Lucy Howard, is an unhappy eastern socialite sent out west to Lincoln County N.M., to fulfill a prearranged marriage to a man whom she does not love, John H. Tunstall, a young proprietor. When her husband-to-be hires a young farmhand, destined to become the notorious Billy the Kid, Lucy's unhappiness is tempered as she falls in love with the young future outlaw.

John is constantly harassed and threatened by the Santa Fe Ring as he and his competing business is unwelcome. The Ring unofficially runs Lincoln County, and when they make good on their threats and murder John, Lucy's own life is threatened and is forced into the war that arises with the death of John as her own life is in danger.

Lucy then finds bittersweet freedom while fighting alongside her true love, Billy, and the rest of the Lincoln Co. Regulators, and is forced to acknowledge the horror of the oppression of women as she fights for the oppression of others in general.

A fascinating tale of death and tragedy alleviated by humorous episodes as Lucy finds her way in a third class society foreign to her.

The reader easily learns to care about the characters in the story and can’t help but read to find out what happens next. I couldn’t put this book down.

_______________________


Let’s face it, men don’t read romance novels and I’m no exception. That includes my gay friends too (put your show tunes stereotypes behind you). When our wives and girlfriends drag us to chick flicks and we let you cry on our shoulders, any tears we may be shedding are tears of pain and boredom. Our feminine sides want us to slap those silly women straight and tell them to get on with their lives.

I can’t tell you why I not only read Maddalo Dixon’s Bandita Bonita, but wanted to read it. The truth is, I tried to find it unsuccessfully on Amazon and iBooks and had to download it on Nook, which is my least favorite platform. Only later was I able to find the correct links on the other two vendors. Even then I the book was an impulse buy because it was a romance. But the blurb hooked me, and I read one of Dixon’s online blogs describing a purple prose confrontation with her obnoxious neighbors and I knew in my heart that this author, a Philly girl, was no delicate primrose.

Dixon’s female readers should be assured that she dishes out plenty of girly scenes to keep them enthralled. In fact, whenever I began to forget Bonita was, in fact, a romance she made sure to throw in a what my wife and I call another Smallville scene to heighten the heartbreak potential. (CW fans know the formula: Clark/Lana, Oliver/Laurel—substitute any two CW characters—in this case, Billy and the heroine Lucy, arguing who should make the greater self-sacrifice, set their love aside and go their separate ways forever.) But the scene would be over in a paragraph or a couple of easily browsed pages, the bad guys would threaten mortal peril and more manly interests would engage me again. All in all, Dixon balances her male and female readers’ interests with a deft turn of pen.

Dixon injects the fictional Elucia Howard, or Lucy, into the historical story of William Bonney (Billy the Kid) and John Tunstall at the outbreak of the Lincoln County Wars in New Mexico. History buffs will remember this period as the moment that established Bonney’s reputation as a gunslinger and folk hero. Lucy’s father arranges her marriage to cattle baron and merchant Tunstall just as he prepares to engage in a war with competing merchants Murphy and Dolan (who paid the sheriff to back them).

Tunstall, who has no interest in Lucy except for her land and money, delegates Billy to keep her company and teach her how to shoot to protect herself in the wild country. Lucy, who never liked being told what to do, yearns for independence. As readers anticipate, the two fall in love. When Dolan’s men kill Tunstall, Billy has to take Lucy on the run to protect her from the range war that follows. She fights with grim determination to prove herself as capable a rider and gunman as any of Billy’s gang. As Dolan’s men close in, Billy and Lucy’s relationship becomes as volatile as the life they live.

Dixon’s account of the Lincoln County Wars, Lucy’s ride with Billy and the Regulators, the New Mexico landscape and towns to which they run are vivid and visual, even her minor characters full of life. She paints every detail, from the dinners to the music to dances. Readers looking for a sense and scent of Southwestern history will find it in these pages. And, although I’m no historian, the story squares with the accounts I’ve read of the period.

Lucy’s story isn’t complete. Bandita Bonita is the first in a series and ends with the five day war between the Regulators and the Doyle gang in Lincoln that ended with Bonney on the run and the beginning of his official declaration as an outlaw. Male readers should be cautioned that the book will drag for you in the beginning, as Billy comes a courting and Lucy dithers over her duty to Tunstall and her attraction to the young gunslinger. Then the shooting starts and romance readers may have to wade through a few action pages to get their heart tug fix.

Nor can Dixon resist dabbling in modern romantic dialog. (Can you say “anachronism”?) I stopped counting the number of times Billy promised Lucy he didn’t have an agenda, a word I’m not sure existed in the Wild West, much less in the vocabulary of a marginally literate gunslinger. In fact, on the whole, Billy’s character seemed far to well-spoken for a someone from his background (and I should know, I grew up with ranch hands and farm boys).

But if I’m going to nitpick Dixon, I would have to nitpick Shakespeare, and this is one of the reasons I would never tackle historical novels of any kind, at least not as a writer.

________________________


This book caught me on page one and refused to let go. It was suspenseful, charming and sexy. And above all it flowed beautifully. Being a historical nut I was pleased at how well the book followed actual history. Very well done, Ms Dixon. And may you pen many more, JRW

_______________________


Catching the sensibilities and texture of the nineteenth century, this first novel both entertains and enlightens. It is a well researched account of the old west and one Billy the Kid, who despite being depicted in countless movies and books before this, somehow seems more human here than ever before. That may be due to the story being told through the eyes of a young woman thrust into a world she is unprepared for, but doesn't hide from. It is passionate and rich in it's grasp of the past, from the fabrics of the dress to the specialties of the firearm. It all brings to life one of the most interesting and yes, exciting chapters in the distinctively American frontier west - the Lincoln County War. Look it up if you are not familiar with it. It's fascinating stuff. But before you do that, get this book and read it.





Wednesday, February 24, 2016

11 Biggest Mistakes Self-Published Authors Make: By Michelle Brown, Senior Publishing Consultant

11 Biggest Mistakes Self-Published Authors Make

               Written By: 





  • 8/26/2015
  • Michelle Brown, Senior Publishing Consultant

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    (To Read Excerpts from the Upcoming Second Book in the Bandita Series, Bandita Bonita and Billy the Kid: The Scourge of New Mexico, and to Read a Little About Why I Wrote the Series, Check Out the Links at the End of the Article).


    First, an explanation: I wanted to share this because even as a traditionally published author I've always found these to be excellent points and very true for us all; I often try to educate aspiring authors on these issues. I am aware that there are a lot of you who are hoping to complete a work and want to look into self - publishing, so please take a look at this article.







    In 2008, I was fortunate enough to accept a position as the first ever Author Coordinator for Mill City Press. Since that time, I’ve transitioned into the sales division of the company, and have been serving as a Senior Publishing Consultant for the last 6 years. In both of those roles with the company, I’ve spoken to countless authors, and have been able to see a trend with some of the biggest mistakes and misconceptions that authors seem to have before and during their publishing process for their book.
    I hope that by outlining some of these commonalities, I’ll be able to help prevent some of the pitfalls for up and coming indie and self-published authors!

    1. Skipping or Skimping on Professional Editing

    Editing is the single best investment you can make in your book, period. There is a reason why books that are published through a traditional publisher go through countless rounds of editing by multiple editors before the manuscript is published. To me, trying to publish and sell a book without having it edited by a professional book editor is the equivalent of trying to sell a rough diamond to someone without having a gemologist cut and polish the stone first. First impressions are everything when it comes to readers, and when a reader finds an alarming number of errors in the first ten pages of your book, the chances are pretty darn high that not only will the reader NOT be finishing your book, he or she will also be taking the opportunity to point out all those errors in an Amazon review.
    Also, when it comes to editing, you get what you pay for. If you choose to have your book edited by your great aunt Mildred who used to be a high school English teacher, or find the lowest cost book editor possible on Craigslist, or decide to rely on good old spell-check in Microsoft Word, the odds are pretty darn high that your book will have a lot of typos and errors that it wouldn’t have had if you had invested in a professional book editor.
    And lastly, no author can self-edit their work no matter how much talent they have. Stephen King can’t self-edit his work, JK Rowling can’t self-edit her work, and neither can you. Summation: get a professional, credible, highly recommended and vetted book editor.

    2. Not Considering the Importance of Well Directed Marketing

    The sales success of a book is determined by how well the book has been marketed to its target audience. You could have the best book of the century, but if (the right) people are not aware it exists, you won't sell many copies. Publishing a book on your own is just like starting a new business. You can't expect your business or your book to do well if you don't apply any marketing efforts with targeted potential customers. A self-published book with a strong sales record is most likely because the author is treating their book publishing process like a new small business. This author has probably invested a substantial amount of time and effort into marketing and promoting their books to their potential customers.
    Also, it isn’t possible to market your book to every potential reader in the universe. Targeted marketing is the key; figure out your book’s audience as early as possible, and try and promote the book to your target audience as much as possible both before and after the book is released.

    3. Not Becoming Educated on the Publishing Business

    One of the biggest reasons why so many self-publishing companies are able to take advantage of first time authors is because most authors don’t take the time to learn the language of publishing.
    For example, almost every author I talk to confuses distribution with marketing, and they’re two entirely different elements. Distribution refers to anything that pertains to the selling activity for the book. Marketing refers to promoting your book to your intended audience. If an author isn’t aware of the difference, it’s easy to think that you’re getting a much better deal with a self-publishing company than you actually are.
    If you don’t understand what a service means or entails, ask the publishing representative or consultant to explain it in plain language to you. If the representative or consultant can’t explain it to you, chances are you don’t want that service (or that publisher to be helping you publish your book).

    4. Rushing the Publishing Process

    Publishing a book the right way is not a sprint, it’s a marathon. It’s a common misconception that writing the book is the hardest part, when in fact; there is a tremendous amount of time consuming work that goes into getting a book ready for publication and release. Yes, there are publishers out there who will promise that your book can be published within some insane time frame of 30 days or less. However, keep in mind that traditional publishers need a lead time of 1-2 years to release a book that meets their quality standards, and your book will be competing with these. The bottom line is that major concessions will need to be made to meet an expedited timeline, and that will most likely have a negative impact on the quality of the book.
    If you want the fast food approach to publishing a book, that’s fine; just understand that your book is going to be more McDonalds than Le Cirque.

    5. Not Taking Experienced Professional Advice

    When you ask us for advice on what to do with your book, we provide responses based on the industry knowledge and experience that we’ve collected since we started publishing independent authors in 2007. Although one of the biggest benefits of self-publishing is that authors have more control over the publication of their book, it’s still in the author’s best interest to listen to any concerns or feedback that the publishing services staff provides to the author during the process.
    I’ll give you a specific example; it’s well known in the industry that it’s much easier to get a book into bookstores if it’s published in a paperback instead of hardcover format. We had an author who published a fiction book with us, and one of the author’s biggest goals was to get the book into national distribution with Barnes and Noble. We strongly advised the author to publish in a paperback format instead of hardcover, or, at the very least, to consider publishing in both formats. However, the author was adamant about only publishing the book in a hardcover format and wouldn’t even consider paperback. The other critical error was when the author printed 5000 copies of the hardcover format. When the book was presented to the national fiction buyer for Barnes and Noble, they were enthusiastic about the book, but guess what? They only wanted it in paperback. We could practically hear the author’s heart sink when we broke the news to him. So, not only did the author have to eat the printing cost of 5000 hardcover copies of his book, he also had to eat the printing cost for re- publishing and re-printing the book in a paperback edition.
    Long story short, when we tell you to consider doing something for your book (or not do something for the book), it’s always in your best interest to listen. Let our experience help you be more successful.

    6. Not Reading the Publishing Contract

    This is another example of how many self-publishing companies take advantage of first time authors. The publishing contract is a legally binding document. If it’s done correctly, it should stipulate every possible scenario of where an author can incur additional fees during their publishing process beyond their upfront cost.
    Ask to read the contract for any publishing company that you’re considering using. If something in the contract doesn’t make sense to you, ask the publishing representative or consultant for clarification. If the publishing consultant can’t explain it to you, that should be a huge red flag for you. Also, if the contract is only one page long, that’s another huge red flag.

    7. Not Investing Time in Your Craft

    I recently read Amy Pohler’s Yes Please, and one of my favorite aspects of her book is that she constantly refers to how hard it is to write a book. She’s absolutely right. Even the most talented and gifted contemporary writers recognize the need to work on their craft on regular basis.
    I love it when I hear an author tell me that they’ve attended a writing workshop, or joined a local writers group, or have a writing coach. If you take the opportunity to use any resources that are at your disposal to give you a fresh perspective on your writing, I guarantee that your work will be better because of it.

    8. Assuming Children’s Books are Easy

    I could literally write an entire book on why publishing a children’s book is one of the most challenging genres, especially when it comes to self-publishing.
    First of all, the success of any children’s book is largely dependent on how good the illustrations are, so you will need to find a fantastic illustrator, which is usually going to mean investing a substantial amount of time and money. Depending on the type of children’s book you want to print and publish, the chances are also pretty good that you’ll have to print the book with an offset printer, which means that you’ll need to print in volume, which means a hefty investment into printing costs (which are not the same as publishing costs).
    Cost wise, if you want to publish a children’s picture book that is comparable to a classic one that’s on the market today through a traditional publisher, be prepared to spend at least 10-20k overall. Your chances for breaking even for cost on a children’s picture book are marginal at best. It’s an extremely competitive genre in today’s marketplace.

    9. Believing Your Book is the Exception to the Rule

    Many authors fundamentally understand how difficult it is to write, publish and sell a book, but they often think these norms don’t apply to them or their book. Of course it is possible. Your book just might be the exception to the rule… But chances are it’s not. Therefore, it’s in your best interest not to do something really off the wall or out of the box because readers don’t want to do a lot of work when it comes to reading books. You want to make it as simple as possible to engage your reader as early as possible, so don’t make it an impossible task to “get” your book (literally or figuratively).

    10. Not Using Social Media Effectively

    Is it good to connect with your readers to help build a following? Absolutely! However, it’s important to know how to do this in an appropriate and productive manner. If you use social media to connect with your readers or target audience, don’t overstep your boundaries. No one needs to hear about how nervous you are about your upcoming colonoscopy, or the weird rash that you found on your foot yesterday. Use social media to provide readers with updates on your published work, and only give personal information about your life that’s relevant to the work (i.e. if your book is about being a dog owner, talk about your dog).
    Also, even the best writers sometimes get negative reviews about their book. If a reader posts a negative review about your book, don’t get discouraged, and most importantly, do NOT get defensive or attack the reader that posted the negative review. If you do feel the need to respond, (which I don’t recommend, see # 5) do so only in a gracious manner and thank the reader for taking the time to read your work and to give their feedback.

    11. Assuming It’s Easy to Get into Bookstores or Major Retailers

    Here’s the deal; physical retailers have a limited amount of shelf space. Therefore, any retail buyer for a brick and mortar vendor has to be extremely selective and savvy about which titles they think will have the best chance of selling. Airports are going to be a total no-go for any self-published author. The next time you visit an airport, take a look at how many books are in that small confined space that are aren’t written by major best-selling authors; my bet is that you won’t be seeing any.
    But don’t despair, there IS hope. As long as you have a returns option for your book, many independent bookstores are willing to give local authors a chance if they feel the book has selling potential. Therefore, get chummy with your local bookstore and be prepared for the information that they’ll need to know about stocking your title (i.e. wholesale discount, which wholesalers they can order the book through, etc.).